Oleanna, Darkness into Light, and what’s coming next…

I have completed Oleanna and Darkness into Light. I am holding myself back from writing a full review for Oleanna right now, due to the fact that I am reviewing this for the HNS and it is our policy not to post reviews on our personal blogs until after the issue has come out. I plan on adding a link to the HNS review, which is limited to 300 words, as well as elaborating on my comments here, in August. To summarize my thoughts on Oleanna, however, I found it to be a gently told tale with quiet depth, atmospherically stark yet richly detailed (how can that be? I will explain in the review), like the culture and the people of Norway herself. Quite beautiful.

For Sam Baty’s post-WW2 thriller, Darkness into Light, which continues the adventures of Jennifer and Otto (survivors from the first adventure during the war), I would write exactly the same review for this book as I had for the first installment. Thus, the problem with reviewing books in a series. In order to avoid useless repetition, I will simply direct you to the first review, HERE.

Next up: Eucalyptus and Green Parrots (Lori Eaton) 

THEN: Vivaldi’s Muse (Sarah Bruce Kelly), Spirit of Lost Angels (Liza Perrat), The Concubine’s Gift (K. Ford K), Saving Gerda (Lilian Darcy–with its beautiful cover–I really wish this wasn’t only an e-book!), and The Other Alexander (Alexander Levkoff). That should take us into the winter, and I am trying to read faster so that I can also fit in a few other e-book  titles before the new year.

Reading a little slower than I had hoped…

BEA itself was the usual frenetic, crowded, overwhelming, and FUN experience. Wandering the booths, that is. I attended one educational session, titled “The Current Size of U.S. Book Publishing: Exploring Shifts (2008-2011) Across Format, Category and Channel” in which supposedly the “members of the BookStats Steering Committee will reveal topline results from BookStats 2012 and discuss the importance of good data to the entire industry.” They definitely discussed the importance of good data… Since the study hadn’t been officially released and the authors were unwilling to spill the beans on the results, they instead discussed the statistical methodology used to come up with the study design. I think I can speak for the majority of attendees in the room when I say we were collectively disappointed that the title of the session was so misleading. I also attended the session for book club leaders, in which the latest book club titles were promoted by publishers. It was a very useful and informative session, actually, and I came away with copies of some of the wonderful titles.

As for my reading progress, I am moving forward like a car on the Washington, DC beltway at rush hour. I do apologize; life does tend to get in the way of reading at times, especially recently having returned from a trip to New York City! I am three-quarters of the way through Oleanna, and then I shall move on to Darkness into Light. I will be a bit late on reviews, unfortunately.

BEA Blogger Conference, Part 2: “‘Critical Reviews’ Saved the Day”

The panel that I thought was worth its weight in gold was the “Critical Reviews” session, chaired by Barbara Hoffert of Library Journal and author of the yearly BEA galley and signing guide.

My favorite speaker on the panel was Janice Harayda, editor-in-chief of the blog One Minute Reviews, as well as a journalist and author herself. She spoke about the lost art of the smart, witty book review. And the honest book review. Nowadays, “review inflation” (like grade inflation at universities) is more common than not, as is “self-censorship by critics.” Perhaps because of lawsuit fears? Or because reviewers are afraid to lose their valuable connection with certain publishers? (that fear was mentioned once, at least) I’m sure there are many other possible reasons as well. Janice does not accept review copies, I assume to assure no bias. I’m not sure I personally would go that far, but I admire her stance.

What she was saying matched my reviewing philosophy and reinforced that I am not alone in my views. I do write critical reviews (and by the word “critical,” I mean “characterized by careful, exact evaluation and judgment”-thefreedictionary.com) and the reason I do is because I truly believe review inflation “fosters cynicism in readers” (Janice’s statement). “False advertising” is another way to think of it, and my standards are clear regarding this issue. I write for the readers; I review to help readers select the best books in the genre, the ones worthy of their time and money—precious resources that should not be wasted.

Janice’s advice for writers of critical reviews included the following:

-Be fair

-Lay out the facts for the reader and allow her or him to judge

-Put the positive aspects of the book (and there is always something) in the lead

-Focus on the book, on the content, and never on the person–in other words, don’t personally insult the author

-Be witty

-Never use inflammatory words and never let anger rule. Don’t be in an agitated emotional state when laying out the facts; be calm.  Simply quote what the author says, then cite the facts.

Janice also recommended taking a look at the reviews by Michael Dirda and Dorothy Parker as examples of smart, witty prose. She also posted a handout she gave us, called “A Neon Sign at the Topless Bar of Literature: 12 Tips for Writing Good Book Reviews When Publishers Hit You with Their Worst,” which can be found here: http://oneminutebookreviews.wordpress.com/2012/06/04/how-to-write-good-book-reviews-when-publishers-toss-you-their-worst/.

If you want to improve your reviews, read this. It’s short, concise, and infinitely helpful.

Florinda Vasquez, of “The 3 R’s Blog” emphasized that critical or negative reviews should be 1) useful for the readers; 2) constructive, letting the author know where one thinks the book falls short; and 3) diplomatic.

I have been reading some posts complaining that the lawyer on the panel (Mark Fowler) was trying to scare bloggers regarding possible libel suits. That was not my take on his information at all. Perhaps coming from an editorial perspective myself (we, as an academic press, publish political, military, and international affairs nonfiction), where the issue of libel is a daily reality, I believe this is an important factor to be aware of. Mr. Fowler did state that the possibility of being sued for libel in a fiction review is quite remote, but how can it hurt for bloggers to be educated on the difference between “constitutionally protected opinion” and libel? These are the types of issues that professionals in the field take seriously, and if bloggers want to be taken seriously as professionals by members of the publishing sphere, then they must understand and practice professional standards as well.  From my vantage point, this is what Mr. Fowler was attempting to do. Educate. Not frighten, but educate. Libel is a frequent occurrence, unfortunately, and what one does not know can harm oneself and others.

One other important topic that I want to mention is Janice’s recommendation to have a clear review policy on your blog. It should include statements such as if a publisher sends you an unsolicited review copy, you are not obligated to review it; and you will accept books for review consideration. The terminology is important and a publisher or author’s expectations do not mean that you have to review every single book that is requested of you.

Remember, she said at the end of the session, who you are writing for. Think about your audience and tailor your review to their needs. As for me, I am writing for the readers, not the publishers or even the authors. And I will stick to that statement.

Now, as for the other breakout panel, I attended “Demystifying the Book Blogger & Publisher Relationship.” And I was not impressed. Being told that blog stats are crucial in order to one’s blog to be recognized by publishers simply turned me off. Measuring stats is a quality vs. quantity issue, and I aim for quality. The stats counters would not like me. Discussion closed.

Truly, I didn’t find much information of value here. I’m not sure I want a relationship with a publisher, first because I review mostly self-published books, and second, I am not going to jump through anyone’s popularity hoops. This leads back to the “review inflation” issue I just wrote about and I simply won’t play the game to remain on anyone’s good side. Perhaps this panel offered good information for other attendees, but not for me.

To wrap up this observation piece, I do not anticipate attending this conference next year. The “Critical Reviews” panel saved the day, but the bottom line is that I didn’t appreciate being a captive audience to be marketed to by authors and publishers. That isn’t what a blogger conference should be about.





BEA Blogger Conference 2012, Part 1

I will be posting a short series on some of the interesting and relevant topics that came out of Book Expo 2012 in between book reviews.  Indie books are a HUGE segment of the market now, and I have a resource or two to share with those who have chosen to take this route. I was taking notes during the sessions—especially the impressive and professional “Critical Reviews” session from the blogger convention—and I will share some of what I learned as well.

To begin. . . the blogger convention. I was both ambivalent and excited as I entered the Javits Center on Monday. Am I too old for this, I wondered? Will it be terribly commercial? Helpful? Well, those, among others, turned out to have been valid concerns. I am going to speak honestly about my own views here, and they may be controversial to some. I realize that my point of view is in the minority at this point, and it is just one humble person’s opinion, so please bear with me.


Gender: The conference was overwhelmingly composed of female attendees. Yes, there were some men, too, but if I had to give a percentage, I would guess five percent male, maximum. Not surprising, given that the two major speakers were both females and writers whose work would appeal to a female audience.

Age Range: From where I sat (at the back of the room), it seemed to me that the majority of bloggers present were under 30.  If I had to guess, I would say the largest group was the under-30 crowd, and the second largest group was composed of older attendees, over 50, perhaps. I, being “middle-aged,” certainly felt in the minority, but as I said, it was difficult to tell for sure. I’d be curious to hear other attendees’ observations.

Content of the conference:

The “networking” meals: Hmm. This is where I could get myself into trouble. First, what were “networking” meals? A group of attendees at each table and an author sitting down and speaking with (or at) them for 15 minutes.  The authors would then  rotate; most tables had a rotation of four authors. I’m not going to name any of the authors, since I also learned the difference between constitutionally protected opinion and libel during the week. . . . Some authors were very engaging and wanted to talk with us. I got a lot out of those conversations–learned interesting facts about these authors and simply enjoyed human-to-human conversation.  Some, however, just marketed their books to a captive audience. That was a disappointment and made me quite angry. Made me feel quite used, in fact. And where was the “networking”? This was a fan following for authors, a chance for them to “sell” to bloggers; it was not “networking” in any sense of the word. These authors saw hundreds of people over the week, so why would they have formed any special relationship at one (15 minute!!) event out of a large number of such events? As you can tell, I was not pleased with this aspect of the agenda. And it was during these “networking” meals when the full force of the corporate nature of this conference hit me. This is where I start getting controversial…the combination of the emphasis on “swag bags” and free merchandise, and the author-worshiping atmosphere was an axis around which this conference revolved. And I believe this is what many bloggers were concerned about beforehand. Now, I KNOW we all go because we like the freebies (we’re all human, of course), but to market (in the official conference video, for example) the conference that way . . . this is where my ambivalence came from. I was looking for a down-to-earth venue to meet other bloggers in my genre of choice. There really wasn’t much of an opportunity to do that. One way that aspect could have been improved would have been by setting up different tables for each genre or subgenre of literature, and letting us mingle. If an author had to be included, one or more from each genre would have been ideal. As it was set up, we were made to listen to book pitches for genres we didn’t even like! So, my overall assessment of the “networking” meals is quite negative.

The panels: I found the morning “Blogging Today” panel (Zoe Triska, Erica Barmash, Patrick Brown, Jen Lancaster, and Candice Levy) to be helpful, especially in terms of the advice offered on how to get one’s content noticed. Bloggers have to be self-marketers to get noticed these days, given the plethora of blogs out there. An extreme (and from my vantage point, somewhat silly) example of this concept in action was the number of bloggers at the conference handing out business cards to every person who said hello (and some who didn’t). I don’t know about the other attendees, but I was there to make personal connections, not just to force business cards on people.  Yes, one might receive a few extra one-time hits on one’s site as a result of this tactic, but consistent viewers? No. Bloggers will ensure a steady number of hits for other bloggers who share similar interests, rather than one-timers, in my opinion. So, I was reserved when it came to handing out business cards.

Twitter is apparently the key to driving traffic to one’s blog. Not Facebook, for some obscure reason (which I have noticed as well). Stumbleupon was also mentioned. Goodreads is a helpful online reading community to be involved in for networking purposes as well.

Regarding content, one suggestion to “spice it up” was to vary the content on one’s site, for example, setting up weekly features that focus on something other than books. Another idea was to write original content, as in something “meaty and interesting outside of your usual topic, in order to illustrate who you are [what makes you unique] . . .” Another piece of advice: don’t post every day if you are not inspired; if you are uninspired, so will your audience be. And one final thought was to promote imprints that the one really likes (making sure to explain your reasons why). It’s rather a different story for bloggers of self-published books, but even in this subset of publishing, one can find very small publishers and perhaps imprints one likes. As for this blog, my general focus is SP, but there are imprints of mainstream publishers that I would like to promote—those that have a penchant for signing on historical fiction authors and the smaller, more unique presses, the ones willing to take risks.

The topics of code of conduct and plagiarism came up as well. I really have to question the mind-set of bloggers who don’t understand these concepts. They are so basic to almost any field of work: no rudeness, no hypercritical comments on a personal level, and no plagiarizing. I see plagiarism in my day job as a manuscript editor, and these are supposed to be college-educated authors, PhDs!!! Plagiarism is taught in high school writing classes, for crying out loud! Need I say more? Actually, yes. In our media-rich age, unauthorized use of images on one’s site can be a problem, and to avoid that issue, it was suggested to look for open-license photos on Flikr. Excellent suggestion, thank you!

I’m going to save the “Critical Reviews” and “Demystifying the Blogger/Publisher Relationship” afternoon breakout sessions for a later post, since I have a lot to say about them and I’d like to get this post up before my train pulls in at the station.

The main speakers: The two main speakers were Jennifer Weiner and Jenny Lawson. I was there for the first, but not the second. It was an entertaining talk, just not my kind of thing.

Overall, this was a conference for bloggers to reiterate their self-importance. Yes, I found two of the sessions helpful (one made the entire conference worth the trip!), but overall, I don’t think it offered much that will be of use to me because of its corporate nature. I’m just not sure about the blogging culture and how much importance it (including this blog!) should have in the business of professional publishing. Blogging is in its toddlerhood, I believe, and will most likely change and mature over time and with the fast pace of technological developments. I do wish there had been more substantive (intellectually speaking) breakout sessions, and I’m afraid the not uncommon lack of professionalism in conduct with authors and publishers, as well as in content, may slow what could potentially be a very thriving semi-intellectual* forum. But then, I’m coming from a very different place than many bloggers, I guess. Okay, I’m stepping down from my high horse now.

*By using this term, I want to make it clear that I realize the purpose of blogging is not to write papers for a college course; I simply advocate a thoughtful, objective, and balanced approach to reviewing, as I have stated in my post titled “Advocating a Middle-of-the-Road Approach to Reviewing.” My reason for this position is that we, as bloggers, are interacting with the professional publishing community; therefore, we need to act professionally ourselves.


What I hope to bring home from BEA 2012…

As far as I’m concerned, part of the fun of BEA is the planning and the anticipation. And the planning I’ve doing! I’ve been pouring over the PW “Galleys to Grab” article, Barbara Hoffert’s “Galley and Signing Guide,” as well as the BEA website and the mobile app. So much potential for enjoyment here! I can’t believe I’ve only got two days before the train leaves the station!

So, this is my obsessive-compulsive personality’s spreadsheet of the “must do” events at BEA this year (it doesn’t include Blogger Con, but that’s a different creature altogether).  I’m wearing three hats this year: as a representative of the press, a representative of the HNS, and for my personal blog. I will be prowling the academic presses and military-political-focused publishers for work contacts, the mainstream presses for historical novels, and although this event is geared around the mainstream publishing world, there are always some small presses and independent authors at BEA, so I intend to seek them out for this blog. I’ll review enticing mainstream HF here as well.

I’m hoping to return with knowledge of how to make this blog better, more contacts and book sources, and updates on the latest trends in paper and e-book publishing. Of course, I will share what I learn here, and I will make sure to post photos and updates from the convention.

I am currently reading Julie K. Rose’s lovely work, Oleanna, which will accompany me on the train; hopefully I can finish it and write the HNS review on the ride home. Then I will begin book two of Sam Baty’s WW2 thriller series, Darkness into Light.

Thank you again for all of the review requests–I intend to catch up on correspondence over the weekend.

Mandatory reading for those considering self-publishing

Helen Hollick alerted me to these fantastic pieces that, in my opinion,  should be required reading for any author who considers self-publishing (or subsidy-publishing).

The first is a blog piece in which a self-published author comes around to accepting that (1) publishing your own book is a lengthy process that entails professional help (in the form of a good editor); (2) it can’t be done quickly or thoughtlessly; and (3) attention to detail–grammar, punctuation, and design, for example–is the quality that differentiates a good SP book from an excellent one, one that looks as if it came from a mainstream publishing house.  http://catherineryanhoward.com/2012/02/27/could-your-self-published-book-pass-this-test/#comment-8202

The second is the blog where Catherine Howard’s self-published book was reviewed. The reviewer has stringent criteria, and I completely agree with her. If an author won’t put the time and effort into producing a professional, error-free publication, why should a reviewer put the time and effort into reviewing it? “Jane Smith” is a brutally honest reviewer, which I admire, for she doesn’t sugarcoat any shortcomings. These are her criteria:

I’m an editor, and I expect published books to be well-written and polished. I’m going to count all the spelling, punctuation and grammar errors I find and when I reach fifteen I’m going to stop reading. Clunky writing will count against you. I’ll read no more than five pages of boring prose before I give up. And I’ll tell the world how many pages I read for every book I review here.


Now that I’ve been alerted to these valuable resources, I am considering changing my reviewing criteria as well.

Upcoming reviews

I wanted to get Footsteps to Forever completed first, as I had promised the author a review. I am now back on schedule. The next review will be Burning Silk by Destiny Kinal, which I will hopefully be able to present by the end of February. And March’s review will be Helen Hollick’s Sea Witch. Looks like some exciting reading ahead!

Review: Footsteps to Forever by R. Samuel Baty

In the first of a projected four-novel series, two American officers (Jennifer, a nurse, and Jonathan, an Army lieutenant) are sent to Norway to rescue an American physicist trapped behind enemy lines . . . and thus begins an adventure that takes them throughout the world theatre of the Second World War. The story follows not only the two brave lieutenants, but a few other main characters, as well, whose fates are interwoven with those of the Americans. To say any more about the plot would be to give it away, so I’ll let that suffice.

This WW2 thriller has all the makings of a transfixing movie; all of the elements are there: a gripping and unpredictable plot, stomach-churning twists and turns, romance and loss, and intimate views from historically important battles (such as the failed raid at Dieppe, the Russian Front, the Normandy D-Day invasion, and the Pacific theater). The author isn’t afraid to kill off major characters, either, lending to the atmosphere of suspense.

It is obvious that the plot was a carefully thought out and filled with creative ideas; the author also has a knack for creating suspense in action. However, two elements made this book rough going for me: characterization and dialogue.

To a reader who is not familiar with military curtness, the dialogue will appear stiff and the prose, straightforward and down-to-earth, perhaps overly so. Compared to flowery literary writing, it is. But one must consider the target audience before making grand pronouncements—after reading Footsteps to Forever, I believe the major audience the book is aimed at is the military (and those interested in things military)—people who appreciate bluntness and action over emotion- and characterization-focused plots and complex word play, the elements that seem to me to be lacking. The author breathes just enough life into his characters for the reader to sympathize and want to follow their adventures, but hardly enough to satisfy hardcore historical fiction fans, who have come to expect intense character development and an emotional pull along with their historical background. Personally, I would have enjoyed more details about these intriguing characters and more illustration of how their actions defined who they were—instead of being told that they did—as well as tension building in the romantic relationships.

Military thrillers are not the usual genre that I choose to read, but I am glad this book opened up my adventurous reading side—and the technical details regarding, for example, “heavy water” and the P-38 planes that were flown during WW2, also expanded my education. Dr. Samuel Baty has a twenty-two year career in the Air Force under his belt, as well as advanced education in engineering, and this knowledge base shines in Footsteps to Forever. Occasionally, the technical details overrode the story, but overall, they were kept in check.

The novel was cleanly edited—only a few typos—professionally typeset, and the cover was descriptive of the contents, if a little masculine for my personal taste. Then again, think “audience.”

If you want an engaging action-driven plot and can live with the lack of strong character development, you will enjoy this adventure. If, however, you are seeking a lush, character-driven period piece, this will not be your cup of tea. I enjoyed this book for exactly what it was—a thrilling WW2 adventure.

Footsteps to Forever by R. Samuel Baty, iUniverse, 2008, $19.95, paperback, ISBN 978-0-595-49640-2

Disclaimer: I have worked with this author in my official position at the HNS.

Upcoming reviews

I have begun reading Burning Silk by Destiny Kinal in its entirety and will be writing a review for it in the near future.  Although I am only on page 40, I am struck that Kinal’s writing is that of an experienced, not first-time, novelist–very impressive. I had previously read the first few chapters as HNRO editor and relied on my reviewer’s opinion to recommend this book as my pick for Stephanie Barko’s interview, and it is about time that I read it in its entirety.

First, however, I will post a review of Sam Baty’s Footsteps to Forever, a copy of which was kindly (and quickly) sent to me by the author. I am three-quarters of the way through and hope to have a review up in the next two weeks.